On Friday the school went down to the Pt England beach.I was happy because we got to play games.The picnic was cool because I played on the playground with my friends.Then we went to play at the beach. After that we played tiggy on the sand.
Hi Zion, I like that you went down to the Pt.England beach. I like that you enjoy going down there. Next time you could add more sentence's an make it interesting.
Hi Zion, I like that you were happy when you went down to the Pt.England beach on Friday. I like how you said that you and your friends played tiggy at Pt.England beach and had a great tome there.
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Hi Zion,
I like that you went down to the Pt.England beach. I like that you enjoy going down there. Next time you could add more sentence's an make it interesting.
Bye from, Cezar
Hi Zion,
I like that you were happy when you went down to the Pt.England beach on Friday. I like how you said that you and your friends played tiggy at Pt.England beach and had a great tome there.
Bye from, Nathanial
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