Tuesday, 4 September 2012

Re Crafting

Today we practised recrafting a piece of writing. The first paragraph is Aldora's and the second is mine.

Aldora’s Cross Country Recount

I had fun running the whole track with my friends. It was awesome, and most of all it’s fun hearing about your friends achieving their goals. It was an amazing day.

Around the track, I had fun running with my friends. Hearing about my friends’ achieving their goals, made the day awesome.