Tuesday 4 September 2012
Re Crafting
Today we practised recrafting a piece of writing. The first paragraph is Aldora's and the second is mine.
Aldora’s Cross Country Recount
I had fun running the whole track with my friends. It was awesome, and most of all it’s fun hearing about your friends achieving their goals. It was an amazing day.
Around the track, I had fun running with my friends. Hearing about my friends’ achieving their goals, made the day awesome.
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Hey Zion
Love you blog post. It is the same as frank's one. but any ways it is rely good
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Zion its me Tyrone I saw your story keep up the good work. It sounded exusting and fun good story.
Hi,Zion my name is Nadis and I live in Mobile,Alabama in the United States.Your blog was very interesting.I was really amazed at how well you grasped the concept of re crafting. Your sentence was well written and lacked grammatical or punctuation errors. Keep up the good work!!!!!
hey Zion nice work you have over there. keep up the good work zion
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